So, I’ve
talked before about the editing process I go through each time I finish a book.
With my latest complete book, this has been added to slightly and I thought I’d
share some of the interesting things I’ve learned.
Now, as
mentioned before, my editing cycle usually goes: I edit, my wife edits and
fills in the spaces I’ve left for her, I edit, then I send it off to my parents
(my mom line-edits, my dad gives me content feedback), then I edit again. This
time I decided to reach out to a larger group of beta-readers, adding a few
more layers to my editing.
Why did I
decide to do that this time? Three reasons – the first is that I have way more
confidence in this book than any of my previous ones (I’m really happy with it!
It’s very rare for any writer to actually be happy with what they’ve created),
the second is that one of my dad’s coworkers asked to read my latest couple of
books and he gave me some really important feedback on how some world building
seemed absent from the book – something missed by everyone else because they’d
read my previous books set in the same world. The third and final reason is
that I was trying something risky with this book (it’s a secret!) and I needed
a wider pool to test if it was working.
I haven’t
collected back in all the feedback yet, but what I have heard has shown me some
interesting things. Because I’m getting feedback from so many more people than
usual, I decided that, rather than go through the book with each set of editing
suggestions, I would compile them all in one place. This way, I can compare the
suggestions from multiple people and – best of all – see where they overlap.
Of course,
everyone is providing feedback on a level they are comfortable with – some just
give feedback on content, some line edit, and some do both. As I’m adding in
all the editing suggestions together, it’s fascinating to see the overlaps.
Sometimes, multiple people suggest exactly the same edit (which is really cool
to see, even it’s usually typos). Other times, I end up with multiple solutions
to the same problem – which is really helpful because, not only do I have
multiple suggestions to choose from, but it highlights when several people get
caught up on the same thing that I might otherwise pass off as something of opinion
or taste.
Just as
fascinating is seeing what different people catch. This is most obvious with
typos – it’s easier to forgive myself for the number of typos that slipped by
my notice when I’m seeing some editors catching typos that other editors
missed.
As for that
risky thing I mentioned – that is the neatest thing of all to see. So far I’ve received
the same feedback across the board on it (except from the one speed reader, who
I believe missed the key introduction). Overall, everyone understood what I was
doing and approved (though one, while approving the concept, did question the
necessity of it and we had a great conversation on the topic), but they all had
trouble with one minor, easily changed aspect of it. This was exactly the
feedback I was looking for and now I can make the essential changes. I know, I
know, I’m being cryptic and you have no idea what I’m talking about – you’ll
just have to wait for the book to get published so you can read it.
So, the
moral of the story is that having a large pool of beta-readers to help improve
your book is a wonderful thing. I’m so glad I reached out to more people than
usual.
Also, make sure you check out my wife's blog and her life coaching website.
If there's any subject you'd like to see me ramble on about, feel free to leave a comment asking me to do so.
